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Lead-in
As we will see
there are disciplinary differences in Methods sections
even the heading Methods
is not always used
as when authors use
The Study as their section heading
or Materials and Methods.
In some fields
it is common to have subsections
in Methods
that might deal with materials
the apparatus used
definitions employed
the subjects or participants in the study
or the statistical
procedures
or mathematical models used.
The section may vary
from very condensed one
to elaborately extended one.
Objectives
This chapter is designed
to help the students to
Get to know seven "moves"
in Methods sections
Understand
both the condensed
and extended types
Learn to use linking phrases
Tasks
Let’s start with a reading sample
Here is the Methods section
from a paper investigating
hypothetical consumer behavior
in buying stolen
pirated
or counterfeit goods
from the black market
The Method section includes two parts
participants and procedure
and questionnaire
Read it and then answer the questions
Take the first part as an example
The authors
gives the total number of participants
explaining that
they come from either
the University of Canterbury
or from the general public
recruited in four malls
The researchers
simultaneously
mark out the number of each group
(in brackets)
and how many
socio-economic levels
are involved in dividing the second group
of participants
Then
more specific information
such as the overall
age range
and the mean age
the final sample
and the rewards
all participant
were given
for their help
are available in this part
Have you completed
the first reading of the passage
Discussion questions
1. Do you think the level
of detail is sufficient
or insufficient
In other words
is there enough information
to allow the study to be adapted
or replicated by others
If not
what would you need to know
2.What verb tense dominates
Does active or passive voice dominate
Why is this the case
Now let’s take a look at
the suggested answers
Answers
1
It is an extended Method section
with sufficient details
in procedure
Additionally
it still needs to state
how the data was analyzed
2
Past tense and passive voice
(Past passive)
dominate in the Method section
because it describes
what was done by the researchers
several months or even years ago
Key points
This complex section
could be analyzed
by the pattern of seven "moves"
proposed by Peacock (2011)
The pattern consists of overview
research aim/questions/hypotheses
subjects and/ or materials
location
procedure
limitations
and data analysis
The specific contents
may differ from field to field
Take the third move
subjects and/or materials
as an example
In Business
Language and Linguistics
Law
and Public
and Social Administration
a description of the subjects
refers to a description of the people
(groups of people) in the study
and in the sciences
it means a description of the materials
and equipment
It is important
to keep in mind
that the moves
do not necessarily appear
in the order given
The science fields investigated
tend to follow
the moves
seen above
In the remaining fields
the move structure
may be much more
complex and variable
According to Peacock's research
(see the following table)
all Methods sections
contain some explanation
concerning procedures
We can see methods in the sciences
do not generally include
overviews
it is 100% for all fields
Language and linguistics
are most similar
to Business
in terms
of percentage
in each move
In the fields of Biology
Chemistry
Physics
and Public and Social Administration
less than
10% of the Methods sections
include a consideration
of the limitations of the methods
Do you agree on the analysis
You may discuss
with your partner
to find out
other information illustrated
by the table
The frequency of the moves
in different fields
The following Methods section
is taken from a research paper
in a Biology field
Read and discuss the questions
with a partner
How does the author
give an account of the procedures
Are there any explanations
or justifications for the procedures
Answers
There is no chronology here
no use of personal pronouns
and no explanations for the procedure
Also
notice that
the fourth sentence
concludes with
was done following protocols
in Mindell et al
Naming procedures by citation
rather than describing them
only seems possible in fields
with well-established
and standardized procedures
as in some of the hard sciences
We can consider
this type of description
as abbreviated
or condensed
Now let’s identify
two types of methods
Condensed methods
state what the researchers
did with little elaboration
or justification
Extended methods
present readers
with a rationale
of why and how
researchers did what they did
We need to get an idea of how fields
might differ
in terms of the condensed
to extended continuum
Do you agree
The following table will show
Disciplinary Variation
in Methods Section
The extended methods
are more commonly used
in the research fields
of Psychology
Sociology
Education and Applied Linguistics
The hard sciences
including Chemistry
Material Science
Mycology
and Molecular Biology
adopt the condensed methods
in Methods Section
The intermediate
methods can be seen
in research areas
of Public Health
Political Science
Medical Research
etc
However
it should also be noted that
the Methods section
will probably need to be more extensive
if any of these conditions apply
The paper is aimed at
a multidisciplinary audience
The methods
chosen are new
or controversial
The paper is essentially
a methods paper
Language focus
Here is the section of language focus
in this chapter
using linking phrases
in Methods Section of a research paper
to enhance
coherence
and stylistic variety
Linking Phrases in Methods Section
Using a linking phrase
to justify a procedure
in the methodology section
The word “justify” means to
show that something is right or
reasonable
Here
it means to show that
the procedure/ step
is right or reasonable
by offering a rationale
For example
Based on
previous reports of HR
mutations in APL
we performed direct
DNA
sequencing analysis
Here we provide
a few more linking phrases
that operate
to tie sections together
and to add
some stylistic variety
They include
Initial purposive clauses
or phrases
B
Phrases making temporal links
C
Causal or connective phrases
The linking phrases
will be specified
by the following examples
For example
we can use phrases
indicating purpose
“In an effort to evaluate”
“To further test
this hypothesis”
the phrases making temporal links
“During the data collection”
“On arrival on campus
the participants”
phrases revealing the causes
and logical connection
“Based on the feedback
from the pilot study”
“In spite of these issues
we”
Summary
Here are some tips
The main purpose of Methods section
is to describe
(and if necessary defend)
the experimental design
Most of this section
should be written in the past tense
Exact and specific items
are being dealt with
and precise use of English
is a must
Passive voice
often can properly
be used
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