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形态结构一节的作业点评
The assignment review in this section
我们要从以下几个方面展开
will be opened with following aspects.
第一是形态布局
the first is composition arrangement
画面通过由几个
Usually a painting
不同的形态构成
is composed of several different forms
像这幅写生
Like sketch like this
物象摆放在左下方
the subject is placed on lower left
留出右上方大面积空白
leaving a large area of blank space on upper right
画面产生了不平衡之感
The painting produces a sense of imbalance
平衡是画面结构的
Balance is the first requirement
第一要求
for the structure of painting
没有平衡就不会感到稳定
Without balance, it feels unstable
如果在这个基础上
If you add something more on this
加点东西
add more
像图这样
as shown in picture
既有画面形态的变化
with form movement
又能获得均衡的组织
also obtain a balanced organization
是形态结构经营的基本内容
it is the basic content of the morphological composition
第二方面是白形布局
the second is blank arrangement
中国画表现中
In expression of Chinese painting
空白形的经营十分重要
the management of the blank form is very important
这也是中国画的一种特点
which is one of character of Chinese painting
同学们总是关注实象的变化
Students always pay attention to the change of the realistic shape
也就是有象物体的变化
which is the shape of realistic object
而对虚白形缺乏经营
but lack the management of the blank shape
那么白形如何组织才好呢
So how should the white form be organized
这个问题
this issue
我们已经探讨过
We have already discussed
虚形要和具体的实形
The void form must be operated in the same way
同样经营才行
as the solid form
虚形也要有
The void form
点 线 面的组织变化
should have changes in organization of lines and dots
画面的上下左右
the up, down, left and right sides of the paper
及四个边角的空白
and the blanks of the four corners
都应纳入白形结构去考虑
should be considered in the void form structure
这样才能使正负形
so that the positive and negative form
有良好的联系
can be well connected
这两幅学生作业
These two student assignments
在白形经营上
re very well done in the blank management
是非常成功的
well done
画面上下左右十分均衡
The painting is very balanced from top to bottom, left and right
白形借助物象
The white form uses object
生发出一种独特节奏美感
produced a unique rhythmic of beauty
变化丰富
The change is rich
自然而然
and natural
是领会白形结构的上乘之作
It is an excellent work to demonstrated the void form structure
第三
the third
单形布局
Single form composition
在写生中
in sketching from nature
由一个单形布局画面
It is very common
是最常见的
to draw the single form composition
正是由于这个单形
Since it’s precisely because
是唯一的布局因素
this single form is the only element in this composition
它的外轮廓和形之内的处理
the arrangement within the shape
非常重要
is very important
外轮廓的变化
The change of the outer shape
要富有节奏感
should be full of rhythm
这种节奏感
This rhythm
不单在形的动静变化上
is not only in the change of shape and movement
还在浓淡和线面的转换中
but also in the conversion of density and line
应让形的外轮廓具有
The outer shape
丰富的变化
should have rich changes
并形成有趣味的节奏感
And form an interesting sense of rhythm
形的内部
The interior of the shape
要充满生机活力
should be full of vitality
但在寻求无限变化的时候
but when seeking infinite change
不要破整体的气韵
do not break the overall feelings
这是至关重要的
it is important
同学们的写生
in sketching from nature
常常出现的问题
The problem that students often have
是所画之形缺少美的塑造
is lacking of beauty in the shapes
这个问题
This problem
应该从两个方面来探讨
should be explored from two aspects
一方面
one
是外轮廓形缺少节奏趣味
the shape lacks rhythm
另一方面
another is
是形的内部对比过于强烈
the internal contrast of the shape is too strong
削弱了外轮廓的变化
which weakens the change in the outer shape
缺少画面思考的现象
The problem of lacking of image thinking
十分普遍
is very common
除了以上分析的问题外
In addition to the problem analyzed above
形态结构零散
the problem of scattered
简单
and simple form structure
过度设计
over-design
边边角角的经营不到位
and inadequate management of corners
等问题也非常普遍
are also very common
能够按照审美要求构成画面
To compose a painting according to aesthetic requirements
不是一件容易的事情
is not easy
若要把画面结构
it is even more difficult
处理得精妙就更难了
to process the structure delicately
有些同学
some students
为了追求形的结构变化
In order to pursue the structural change of shape
把画面处理得非常杂乱
make the painting very messy
若让他们画得整体一些
If they are allowed to paint more united
往往又会显得很简单
it often appears too simple
这是把握分寸感的问题
This is a matter of understanding and experience
艺术的修养
the artistic cultivation
往往就体现在这种
is always show in here
分寸的把握之中
understanding and experience
-何谓艺术感受
--何谓艺术感受
--随堂作业
-主体条件对感受的影响
--随堂作业
-山水写生内容
--山水写生内容
--随堂作业
-视觉表达形式
--视觉形式表达
--随堂作业
-提炼与概括的含义
--提炼与概括的含义
--随堂作业
-写生示范
--写生示范
-作业点评
--作业点评
-形态结构
--形态结构
--随堂作业
-形态表现案例
--形态表现案例
--案例讨论
-作业点评
--作业点评
-形色结构
--形色结构
--随堂作业
-作业点评
--作业点评
-随堂作业
-形质结构
--形质结构
--随堂作业
-质地表现常见问题
--常见的问题
-中国画空间表现
--中国画空间表现
-作业点评
--作业点评
-随堂作业
-相对因素对比与协调的画面组织
--随堂作业
-作业点评
--作业点评
-平衡
--平衡
-运动
--运动
--随堂作业
-视觉力的变化与均衡
-作业点评
--作业点评
-画面节奏感的表达
--画面节奏感的表达
--随堂作业
-作业点评
--作业点评
-笔墨问题
--笔墨问题
-问题讨论
--问题讨论
-课程总结
--课程总结