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第一问题是冲突
the first problem is conflict

画面没有冲突
Without conflict in painting

体现在缺少相对因素的对比
there will be lack of contrast of relative factors

最常见的是形的雷同
The most common problem is similar in shape

形色无变化
lack of conflict and change in shape

质地无差异
no difference in texture

没有相对因素对比的画面
Painting without relative elements

都没有冲突
always lack of conflicts

由于没有冲突
Because there is no conflicts

缺少势态变化
and the lack of tension change

因此画面也没有
the painting can’t

突出要表达的东西
successfully express itself

作画之际没有强调
When a painting didn’t emphasis

要表现的东西
on what is to be expressed

观者也不知画者在画什么
viewer does not know what the painter intension

但绝大部分同学
But most students

是理解冲突的意义
understand the meaning of conflict

并有良好的表现
and express it very well

二是协调
the second is coordination

协调表现在物与物的呼应
Coordination is manifested in the relationship between elements

不同形态的主次关系
the primary and secondary relations of different forms

不同因素相互渗透
the interaction between different elements

及表现方法的协调统一上
and the coordination expression methods

我们看看图137
Let's look at image 137

相对因素对比非常强烈
The comparison of relative elements is very strong

但是缺少协调处理
but lacks coordination

由于两种因素在面积上均等
Because the two factors are equally arranged

缺少主次关系
lack of primary and secondary relationships

在相互渗透上
and lack of mutual connection

缺乏你中有我
between each other

我中有你的联系
and other relative connections

因此画面给人割裂的感觉
it turns out a feeling of fragmentation

再看图138
Take a look at image 138

两种因素使用较好
the two elements are well used

对比鲜明有力
and the contrast is strong

但在协调处理上欠点火候
but the coordination process isn’t enough

如果在左下方渗透一些
If add more at the lower left

硬朗的线条
with tough lines

与上方的因素呼应起来
interact with the factors above

这幅写生会更完美一些
this drawing will be more perfect

图139
Image 139

则是白形和灰形
shows two elements, white form and gray from

两种因素势均力敌
they are evenly matched

缺少面积比例上的变化
and lack changes in area ratio

因此很难协调统一
making it difficult to coordinate and unify

如果两种因素在组织上
If the two forms distinguish the primary and secondary

分清主次
in the organization

并互有渗透
and interact with each other

在画面协调性上
the coordination of this painting

会有较大提高
will be greatly improved

图3.140的形状过于平均
The shape of image 140 is too average

缺少大小主次变化
lacking major and minor changes in size

导致画面杂乱
resulting in chaos in painting

图141
Image 141

整与散的两种因素
the two elements of united and scattered

形成了很好的对比
are contrast to each other

如果下方零散的图形再少一点
If there are fewer scattered form below

会更加完美
it will be more perfect

从同学们的写生习作来看
From student assignment

使用对比因素建构画面
it is no problem

是没问题的
in using of contrast factors

但在相对因素的协调上
but there are still many problems

还存在很多的问题
in the coordination of the relative factors

需要通过更多的写生实践
More sketching practice is needed

来提高能力
to improve the ability of control contradictory factors

驾驭众多矛盾的关系
in order to work with different conflicts

从而获得既有丰富的变化
and make the painting have more changes

又有统一协调的秩序感
to have a continuous body and vitality

通体气脉连贯
with emotional flow

生机盎然的画面
and lively painting appearance