作业点评在线视频

形的外轮廓变化
Lack of rhythm control

缺乏节奏控制
of form's outer changes

是写生中存在的普遍的问题
is a common problem in sketching

图162这幅习作的外轮廓变化
Image 162, the outline changes of this work

缺少动静节奏控制
lack dynamic and static rhythm control

平均的处理外轮廓
The average treatment of the outlines

带给观者杂乱的感觉
gives the viewer a messy feeling

我们再来看看经典作品
Let's take a look at how classic works

是如何处理的
handle these problems

梅清所作的
Mei Qing's

《黄山图册之文殊院》
"Huangshan drawing of Wenshu Palace"

形的外轮廓非常讲究节奏变化
the outline of shape is particular about rhythm changes

这种趣味是个人化的
This interest is quite personal

这就是梅清专属的美感体验
This is Mei Qing's exclusive aesthetic experience

以线作为构成画面的
It is common to see

主要元素是常见的
using lines as the main elements of painting

但往往学生罗列了很多线条
but students often place many lines

却不能形成一个
but still cannot form

有节奏变化的组织
a rhythmic organization

这图164幅习作论技术能力
In image 164, the skill ability of this piece

是可以画得非常丰富深入的
can be drawn very rich and in-depth

但由于没有节奏上的控制
but because there is no rhythm control

看上去烦杂而无序
it looks cumbersome and disorderly

我们再来看虚谷的作品
Let's look at Xu Gu's work

以线的形态
with form of lines

作为画面主要因素
as the main factor of this painting

通过粗细
with change of thickness

曲直
straightness

纵横
vertical and horizontal

疏密
density

聚散
meeting and parting

刚柔的变化
though and soft

构成了画面
they together formed the painting

虚谷在相对元素的变化中
In the change of relative elements

把握到对比变化上的节奏感
Xugu controls the sense of rhythm in the change of contrast

元素虽少
Although there are few elements

但表达的内容丰富 微妙
the content expressed is rich and subtle

这是线的形态
This is the most perfect order organization of the line form

最完美的一种秩序组织
organization of the line form

同学们在形色表达节奏感
in expressing rhythm with color and form

这方面体验较少
students have less experience

黑白和色彩变化无序
black and white and color changes disorderly

还不能控制节奏感
and sometime can not control the rhythm

我们来欣赏一下龚贤的作品
Let's take a look at Gong Xian's work

图166中墨的浓淡变化
The change in shades of ink in image 166

带来十分有序的节奏变化
brings a very orderly rhythm change

雅致和富有韵味的墨色变化
with allegiant ink movement

使观众能够感受到
let the viewer feel

画家的审美心境
the artist aesthetic mood

通过质地因素表达节奏感
through texture element training

是很有效果的实践
it is a very effective practice

但多数人
but most people

有节奏创作意识和能力
have the consciousness and ability to create texture

却不知道如何去组织
but do not know how to organize them

如图167就体现出
as shown in image 167

质地组织常见的问题
it shows the common problems of texture organization

组织有规律可循吗
Does the organization have rules to follow

我想多样统一
I think that diversity and unity

主次明确
primary and secondary

运动而均衡
movement and balance

节奏感强
and strong sense of rhythm

仍是质地的组织法则
are still the organizational rules of texture

图168是一幅同学的写生
image 168 is a student’s work

通过两三种质地元素
through two or three texture elements

表达出了有节奏的美感
It expresses the beauty of rhythm

是非常好的写生作品
It is a very great work of landscape sketching

在相对因素组织中表达节奏感
expressing a sense of rhythm in the organization of relative factors

是写生中的主要任务
is the main task in landscape sketching

也是最难把握的
and is also the most difficult part

很多情况下
In many cases

学生努力去表达
students strive to express

内心对美的感受
their inner feelings about beauty

但常常不能令人满意
but always unsatisfied

这里主要有两种原因
there are two main reasons

第一种原因
one is

是个人审美趣味的局限
the limitation of personal aesthetic interest

审美趣味的形成与修养有关
The formation of aesthetic taste is related to self-cultivation

这决定着表达内容的境界
which determines the content of expressing

第二种原因
the second reason

是缺乏表达节奏感的能力
is lack of the ability to control rhythm

能够灵活地运用视觉语言
and the ability to flexibly use visual language

表达节奏美感
to express rhythm

需要通过不断的专业实践获得
it needs to be obtained through continuous professional practice

因此我们设计了
That’s why we designed

节奏感体验与表达的训练课题
the training course of this subject

目的就在于
aims to

提高这方面的认识
improve the understanding

和绘画的表达能力
and expressive ability