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4.2 从属连词引起的破句
大家好 我是Rill 欢迎大家加入我的课堂
比尔盖茨在他的演讲释放你的创造力中说道
作为一个父亲 我认为非洲孩子死去
所引起的痛苦和悲伤丝毫不亚于任何其他的孩子的死亡;
而且使这些孩子们的命运发生翻天地覆的变化并不费太大力气
而且使这些孩子们的命运发生翻天地覆的变化并不费太大力气
请仔细检查一下这个句子
该句句子结构是否完整
不完整 该句为破句
那么什么是破句呢
破句是缺少主语或动词的单词组和/或无法表达完整想法的单词组
破句
无论我什么时候去上学
无论什么时候是一个从属连词 无法引出完整想法
所以不能单独成句
正确的句子
无论什么时候去学校 我都坐公交车
破句引出了完整的想法
每个句子都必须有主语和动词 并且必须表达完整的想法
缺少主语或动词并未能表达完整思想的单词组是破句
以下是最常见的破句类型:
1.从属连词引起的破句
2. -ing和to引起的破句
3.增加细节引起的破句
4.缺少主语的破句
在论文写作中最好避免破句
本课将解释何时出现从属连词引起的破句以及如何避免
现在 你可能会感到困惑
比尔盖茨在他的著名演讲中使用了一个破句
为什么我们不能像他那样做
我们来看一看是什么让他的破句合理
这与演讲文体有关 演讲中不太正式 口语化的英语是可以接受的
书面用语最好这样说
作为一个父亲 我认为 非洲孩子死去
所引起的痛苦和悲伤丝毫不亚于任何其他的孩子的死亡
我认为 使这些孩子们的命运发生翻天地覆的变化并不费太大力气
现在我们就直入主题吧
从属连词引起的破句何时出现
当你用从属连词来引导一个句子
这时候就要小心 别造出破句
从属连词
before, after, when, whenever, while, until
if, whether, unless
even if, even though, although
as, since, because
so that, in order that
how
where, wherever
that, which, whichever
who, whom, whose
what, whatever
下面是一个由after引导的破句
我提现了薪水后 我奖励自己一顿晚餐
以after这样的从属词开头的从属语句不能独立存在
该句为破句 取决于另一个陈述来将意思表达完整
After I cashed my paycheck让读者不知所言
大家想知道的是在提现薪水后发生了什么
要修正破句 只需要将意思表达完整即可
我提现了薪水后 就奖励自己一顿晚餐
如您所见 从句本身是破句
必须附加到一个能完整表意的句子才能成句
我不会离开家的直到我收到你的消息
瑞克终于捡起了袜子他几天前扔在了地板上
Until I hear from you是个破句,无法单独成句
我们想知道收到消息了会发生什么
同样地 That he had thrown on the floor . . .无法完整表意
That指的是什么呢
怎样纠正一个由从属连词引起的破句呢
通常 通过将从属连词引起的破句
附加到后面的句子或前面的句子来更正它
我提现了薪水后 就奖励自己一顿晚餐
这个句子就是将破句附加到后面的句子上
瑞克终于捡起了他几天前扔在了地板上的袜子
(这个是将破句附加到前面的句子中)
您来连接从属词破句的方法还可以是删除从属词并重写句子
我提现了薪水并且奖励自己一顿晚餐
我等你的消息
他几天前把他扔在了地上
建议
a.如果一个从属词组出现在句子的开头 请使用逗号
但如果它出现在句子的末尾则一般不用逗号
用逗号
不用逗号
b.有时候who, that, which, 或 where不是一开始就出现在一个单词组的开头
此时可能会导致破句
我开车慢慢驶过旧砖房我长大的地方
The place where I grew up并不能表达完整的意思
我们想知道这个地方在哪里
要纠正破句 请将其附加于前一个句子
我慢慢地开车经过我长大的旧砖房
练习
通过将意思补充完整 将以下每个从属连词引起的破句转换为句子
如果从属词在句子开头 则在从属词组后面使用逗号
破句 虽然我觉得很痛苦
纠正 虽然我感到很痛苦 但我试图为摄影师微笑
破句 找到我钱包的男人
纠正 找到我钱包的人第二天把钱包还回来了
好了关于从属连词引起的破句以及改正方法就讲到这里
请牢记在写作当中避免破句
谢谢大家
再会
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